Thursday, February 19, 2009

The walking race.

In the holidays I went to the park to have a race.  I had a race with my big brother.  It was easy for me because he was looking the other way when I started walking.

My movie shows me walking over the finish line.  I beat my brother!
video

6 comments:

  1. Hey Jane

    That was a great story.
    I really liked it.
    That would of been fun beating your brother.
    Talk to you later.
    Bye.

    Your Sincerely
    Mubasshira

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  2. Hey Jane

    I really liked your story that you wrote about the race it was awsome.
    Jane did you like betting your brother in the race?
    Any way well done on your story.

    your Sincerely Jarna and Jessica

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  3. Hi Jane

    that was a really nice story.I wish you can a race with me too.but sory i have to go now.



    Tule

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  4. Hey Jane your movie was great it looked
    fantastic you must be happy you won...

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  5. hey Jane your move is very cool that you wion. from ilalio

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  6. You chose the best part of the story to illustrate! That must have been a good feeling, beating your brother!
    Mrs Burt

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